Saturday 12 March 2011

Rough cut 2



This rough cut was more a tester for the title position within the opening. We put it at the end of the opening which as a result challenged comedy conventions. However, audience feedback suggested we moved the title to appear after the character Stacey leaves her bed. This would connote that the girl from the title, ‘About a Girl’, is Stacey and as a result made the film easier to follow.
Also, the feedback led to the adding of a sound effect of a record cutting out when the character Stuart appears. The audience suggested that this would make it more apparent that the silence was not a mistake but instead a planned technique.   

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